Writing Workshop Feedback in the Voice of Randy Jackson
Yo! Yo, yo, dog. Check it out. Check—Check this out. Yo. This poem is amazing, man. I mean, you've had your moments this semester that were kind of [makes hand gestures], but you really pulled it out here. You know, and you come in here every week and you just—you know who you are and your poems reflect that. I would buy this poem if you read it to me like that, man—it's that good, yo. It's a little pitchy in places, but you cleared up the voice by the end. Yo, dog, you been in the dog pound since the beginning, you know, but this piece puts you at the head of the pack.