I could write one, but I'd have to charge. [grin] I love this song. I'm afraid that until I saw it reviewed in Rolling Stone I thought it was about an actual milkshake, like Kelis worked at Dairy Queen or something (My Blizzard brings all the boys to the yard?)So, I'll work on this. Yeah.
I think you've got your poem right there.
Thanks, Charles. Now that song is stuck in my head . . . again.
"milkshake" is on my snazzy ipod shuffle *right now*...too weird.
PS: It is not lost upon this reader that the line is almost perfect IP.
Peter, I'd call it tetrameter, as I only hear four stresses. "My MILKshake BRINGS all the BOYS to the YARD."It's a line of tetrameter with a couple of dactylic substitutions. I think.
Yeah, I'm with Tony. Gosh, what nerds.